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the sky is falling down?

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No my little ones , is just snow.

Coral and June were wondering around a frozen lake. Coral was getting cold so they were about to return home, when the girls saw that white thing fall from the sky.

FIRST time in my life I try to do perspective like this, at least I tried, Please, some feedback so later I can do a better job.
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HP
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HP pstc4100
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Well the piece over all is very good! The perspective is very daring and anatomically wise it looks amazing!

The only critique I can offer is the cloth around Coral. It's hard to see the arm shape, normally in cloths like that you can see a fold around the arm. The cloth is great at the shoulder but when the angle drops to t he shoulders, its like you loose a bit of that arm-fold definition.

Another thing i just noticed is the legs on June....it looks like she is clenching her thighs together.

Over all its done very well. I think that you should practice in this angle more. For a first try its very well done.

Now I want to try.